My Celebrating My Success 2018

Famous Rock Study

This week we had to do 9 activity each and this was one. We had to research about a famous rock formations around the world and I chose the Árbol de Piedra formation rock because it has more information.

My story

  

            WALT:  To write a descriptive story 

my story  :  A murder in a building

One day I walked past an old rusty building I went in there a very big sound came from nowhere. The walls where were black and horrible. While i was walking around a paper was under my foot I picked it up and read it, it was about a murder that happened in the building. In 1997 a man called steven got murdered by a drunken man, the drunken man stabbed the knife in steven’s stomach so that’s how he died. I walked and I found the knife that steven has been stabbed with . Another large sound came and new that steven turned into a ghost so that was the sound It was nearly night so I went back home. Once I went home I showed the newspaper to mum and she said how did you find the paper then i told her what happened today.

Self assessment: Thing I have done well : I used describing words

I need to work on: I  need to use more punctuation

Peer assessment: I like how you have used descriptive Writing and great language towards your writing.

My trip to India

                      My trip to India 
                     
In the holiday I went to India for a month. with my brother, and I stayed at my grandma's. In India I went shopping and I Meet most of my Family. Most of the time In India I went for dinner with my family.  When I was in India I went to 4 temples. 

WHAT DO LEAVES DO？

For our mamaku science fair in term 2 we had to choose a partner. Me and my partner got a question saying what do leaves do.  We had to find out. This is what me and my partner hazel came up with
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Guess My Number

          can you guess what my number is ?
            

Write a Newspaper Report

WALT: To write a newspaper report

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In term 2 for week 1 we have been learning how to write a newspaper report. For the newspaper report our topic was on the titanic.

How I felt : It was very interesting to know everything about the titanic